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Good afternoon mr.starkiller. I like what you did here, making a satire of poetry. A form of writing that is exceptional when done right, but usually isn't. To be honest ...

Good morning, ms.moon. What you say here is correct, but here is the truth. The church is corrupted,ruined from the glory it once had. The reason being is that Christianity ...

Okay, this is a interesting paragraph, and I have a few complaints. For one, it appears you have inconsistent periods, in poetry unless you are doing a certain style, you ...

Well, this story is interesting, and I have several questions. For one, I can't understand the psychology of the protagonist, it myself be jealousy, but I'm not good at understanding ...

Well, this is a very philosophical piece, with a number of complaints. For one, nothing actually happens in the story, making it quite boring, a experienced writer can merge thoughts ...

Review.exe running 33% complete 99% complete Well, this is a unusual story, and I have several questions. For one, where is the plot, sure the main argument is that "This ...

Well, this is a perplexing story, with it's flaws of course. For one, none of your quotations are indented, this is extremely common. For two, the last paragraph seems unnecessary, ...

Well, this certainly is a realistic story, but I just have a few questions. For one, I just have to question why, sure it may have been or is based ...

Honestly, I am awestruck, here are several reasons why. For one, the flow seems to be near perfect, no English errors present. For two, the story never gets boring, something ...

This appears to be a very well written, intriguing story, witn a few errors. For one, there seem to be many spelling errors, if you want to fix this, then ...

This is a hypocritical view of the Internet, for many reasons. For one, you capitalize to many words and have several spelling errors. For two, the way you describe the ...

Well, this is a interesting story, and has some flaws. For one, the dialogue is confusing, especially at the beginning, when you type dialogue, make sure to indent it. Also, ...

This is certainly a interesting depiction on criticism, with several mistakes of course. For one, it appears that the punctuation is all but nonexistent, this has a high chance of ...

This is a good long story and a interesting depiction of hell, with a few errors of course. For one, the plot seems to fast paced to be able to ...

Well, this is a good story, with inevitably several problems. For one, it seems that the ending was obvious (thanks to the title) even still it was done in a ...