MamaLama95

I had just one or two nitpicks; He growls her - Do you mean growls 'at' her? And another thing which bugs me is your lack of punctuation. It's quite ...

In general, your piece was really nice - I've personally never been one for haikus, but it's honestly quite good in fact, even though I think it got a little ...

A nice enough piece of work, but there's that something missing for me. It just feels understated, ordinary almost - you use poetic techniques perfectly well and you've got a ...

This creates a lot of beautiful imagery and I really applaud you for making it so even and magical. There was one stanza I didn't like; And all of the ...

I thought this was brilliant. Like your other works, it flows perfectly, and there is next to nothing I have to criticize about the grammar, or the meter - I ...

Too short, and painfully concise - it was a nice idea, but you didn't make it work perfectly well. I could suggest you do something about the one-liners, but to ...

This was such a wonderful poem - I can relate to it because I also have insomnia, and I feel like walking around my house and outside every night as ...

Good poem, if a little long and drawn-out. It got too emo-ish towards the end for me, but it had some powerful images and very interesting themes throughout. It felt ...

This poem felt a little forced, and too unemotional for me. It was interesting, and I can relate to it, but it's lacking very much in some sort of deep ...

Your poem wasn't the typical slash-kill-die emo crap I read here sometimes, and you score points for that. However, I do think that it was a little long, and you ...

I think this has probably been my favourite work today. It's so bouncy and lyrical - honestly, it's fantastic. There are a few nitpicks, such as grammar, and a faltering ...

Lots of emotion, and it's clear that there's a history behind these words - I applaud you. I did have some issues with the first two or three stanzas, because ...

I have to agree with my predecessor here - your punctuation use was very scattered and not altogether great. I loved all the deep and intense imagery you conveyed, and ...

I really do love this poem - it possesses this powerful and utterly compelling emotion which you put across in a really beautiful and developed way. It's so clear that ...

You overuse the word 'frozen' in some of the stanzas, but if you found good enough substitutes, then this poem would be fantastic. You've got quite a good grasp of ...