Malooga

Hello there! I really enjoyed the imagery in this piece, simple and suggestive. The major issue I have is the rhythm of the poem. Making the lines look even is ...

You are certainly a lover scorned, truly beautiful. Only pure emotion can relate itself this way. So much of the angsty poems on the site just bore and irritate me, ...

I enjoyed this piece thoroughly. More specifically I really enjoyed the careful use of repetition, as not to be randomly inserted but with practiced spacing and a nice little crescendo ...

Love this piece of prose. So little prose on this site so far in general, just nice to see something a little out of the ordinary. I don't really have ...

Hey there! Time to return the favor. So since I will be poking around in your portfolio quite a bit in the months to come, here's something you should know ...

I want to preface this review by saying I do not think there is such a thing as a bad poem. A poem is just expression, and there is no ...

Well, it's about farts. Not much to say there. I don't mind the subject matter at all -- but one thing you might want to try is subtlety in the ...

It may not be my place to say so, but this seems like the type of poem you DEFINITELY want your ex to hear. :) I really enjoyed the harsh ...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, though I must admit I lose the meaning once or twice, or perhaps it has more than one meaning. Either way I really enjoyed your ...

I like this one too! I particularly like the third stanza (the second and third lines more specifically), a very poetic flow here. This is more what I meant by ...

Well it looks like writersdream has you pretty much pegged in terms of constructive criticism. I liked how you gave the ghost ownership in the first line you should continue ...

Now this I really like. An excellent bridge between poetry and prose, and you did an excellent job of pouring your emotions into this. You set up the characters quickly ...

Whoops forgot to actually write the review before clicking submit haha. I like the poem, to be perfectly honest though it is muddled with some very conflicting and confusing imagery. ...

I like the poem overall and I appreciate the importance it seems to hold to you. You do a good job of pouring yourself into this piece. As far as ...

Very beautiful. The first piece I've read on here that I truly have no advice for (only been on for a couple of days), but I would like to interpret ...