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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ribs and other things

    Hello SparkToFlame, Magenta here to review your poem that you wrote. I must say first of all, that this was very well-written. Though I have some suggestions for you... I ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Choose

    Hello Auxiira, Magenta here to review your poem. Apologies of I don't help because I am slightly new here. I'm not sure that you need the quotation marks around the ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paper Boat

    Hello Fortis, Magenta here to review your poem that you just posted on YWS approximately seven minutes ago. Great poem-by the way-and keep on writing! Alright, I'll try to review ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Machine City Chapter 1 Part 3

    Hello Ulala8, Magenta here to review your short story that I saw only had one review. I am glad to see some writing on here with action. I have a ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Deafening Silence

    Hello Fortis, This here is Magenta to review your poem I found which had one review. I would suggest that you not be so repetitive when you start your sentences. ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Other Re: One Step Forward...

    Hello Dragon99, This is Magenta here to review your short story that you have submitted to The Young Writers Society. One Step Forward... I have some small suggestions to make ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: sweet summer

    Hello Smile, Magenta here to review your poem! Great poem, by the way. Only a couple suggestions for you that I thought could help you. I would like to first ...

    Dec 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Falling

    Hello there, Magenta here to review your poem, Falling, which I must tell you is well-written. Good job! There were a few things, however, that I would like to point ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Should I?

    Hello. This is Magenta here to comment on your poem. I just wanted to tell you that I thought you had a nicely written poem but that I would make ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Save

    Hello FCS, Magenta here to review, but I'm new here so go with your own instincts. ;) I thought that your poem was well-written. I'm not exactly sure what message ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, Review Re: That One Place

    Hello! I am here to review your poem for you if you do not mind. I thought that this poem was well-written. I have a few things to suggest to ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Fantasy Re: Measuring Success

    Yubbies21, I just read your poem and I thought you did well writing it. I hope that I can write a good review for you. I thought that your writing ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Opposites that can't be without

    Great poem... I thought it was pretty cool how you made the poem about things that are opposite but how they still need the other to be an opposite. At ...

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: sickness

    Hello StoryWeaver13, I am here to write you a review. I just finished reading your poem of reality and health, Sickness, which by the way, was well-written. I thought that ...

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Unhinged Reality

    Hello GriffinClaw, The first look/glance that I took of your username, I immediately thought that you were probably a Harry Potter fan. Now either you love Harry Potter, no, I ...

    Dec 28, 2013


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— Jim Rohn