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Re: A Conspiracy of the Present
Hi Silver! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D A little known fact about me is my love of any reference to theater, ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter Two
Hi, LadyEvvy! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D As of right now, I find Kou to be the more entertaining of the ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 9/04/16
Hi, Sheyren! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D Like with last edition, I found this to be very entertaining and couldn't help ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter One
Hi, LadyEvvy! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D Reading this brought back waves of nostalgia. It made me think of both Schadel ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: Annabel (In Progress)
Hi yungcamus! Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! I'm so sorry for taking so long. So let's get to it, shall we? I really enjoyed reading this ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 8/28/16
Hi, Sheyren! Mage here to review your work. So let's get to it, shall we? :D I can see many parallels with Welcome to Night Vale ; each one makes ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: The Cave - Chapter V - Piccolo Calamaro
Hiya, Cupcakes! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? This world is becoming more and more interesting. I'm feeling a lot like Oliver ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 5
Hello, haredrier! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? Out of the dragon and Einar, I would have to pick the dragon as ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Invisibility
Hi, NympheaLily! Mage here to review your poem! So let's get to it, shall we? I really like how you conveyed this message. It's one that I can relate to ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: After Life.....
Hi, DrFeelGood! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? This was a very interesting read. I like how you stress the importance of interpretation, ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Characters
Hi, ChocolateCello! Mage here to review your poem! So let's get to it, shall we? I loved this poem. Then again, I love all of your poems. But I love ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Welcome to America
Hi, ChocolateCello! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? I love everything about this poem. I love how you wrote, the rhyme scheme, the ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: murky depths, memories
Hi, outoftime! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? I'm not experienced enough with poetry to make any comments on the formatting, but ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Stars
Hi pastelqueen! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? I'm still hopelessly in love with your writing style. You're incredibly talented, and this piece ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Reading
Hi pastelqueen! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? I love your writing style so much. It entrances me, keeping me interested in whatever ...
Jul 31, 2016