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Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 9
Hi, haredrier! Mage here to do the long overdue, promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? I love every chapter more than I did the last. This has ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 8
Hi haredrier! Mage here to do the long overdue, promised review! I hope this review helps you out a lot, and makes up for how long it's taken me to ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 7
Hi, haredrier! Mage here to do my long overdue, promised review! I'm sorry for taking so long to write the review for this chapter. Hopefully the actual review makes up ...
Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 6
Hi, haredrier! Mage here to do my long overdue, promised review! I'm sorry for taking so long to write the review for this chapter. Hopefully the actual review makes up ...
Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 6
Hi, marmalade! Mage here to do my long overdue, promised review! Like I said last chapter, I'm sorry for taking so long to write the review for this chapter. Hopefully ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 5
Hi, marmalade! Mage here to do my long overdue, promised review! I'm sorry for taking so long to write the review for this chapter and the next chapter. Hopefully the ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter Four
Hi, LadyEvvy! Mage here to review your work. So let's get to it, shall we? ^_^ I really liked this chapter! ^_^ It was great getting a chapter with both ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 4
Hi, marmalade! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? ^_^ The same overall problems from previous reviews apply to this chapter as well, ...
Oct 22, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter Three
Hi, LadyEvvy! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? ^_^ I don't think it's possible not to like Kou. He's such an entertaining ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 3
Hi marmalade! Mage here for the overdue review! ^_^ So let's get to it, shall we? Overall, your main problems were things I already talked about in my last two ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 2
Hi, marmalade! Mage back again for another overdue review! So let's get to it, shall we? ^_^ Like last chapter, the main overall problem was sentence variety. Besides that and ...
Oct 17, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 1
Hi marmalade! ^_^ Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! I'm sorry for taking awhile to getting around to reviewing this. ^^" I hope that it wouldn't happen ...
Oct 17, 2016 -
Re: The Cave - Chapter VI - Breaking Into the Castle
Hi, Lias! Mage here to do the long overdue, promised review! I'm so sorry for taking so long to do this - I really dropped the ball on this one. ...
Oct 10, 2016 -
Re: deleted
Hi deeproses! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I love how optimistic your poems are. In both this one and All Roses ...
Sep 24, 2016 -
Re: All Roses Have Thorns
Hi deeproses! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I loved this poem! It flowed together so nicely, and the specific problems I ...
Sep 23, 2016