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  • Article / Essay » Culture, Review Re: SQ: More about the journey than the destination

    Hey there! I've never tried reviewing a review before, but I wanted to try my hand at this one. It wasn't until I clicked on it that I realized I ...

    Jan 31, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Imposter

    Hi there! I originally wanted to review this poem because I thought it would be ironic this Review Day; I'm on the imposter team. But I was also drawn to ...

    Jan 31, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That Dream

    It's really cool reading this and knowing that the poem was directed at me - and that it was probably inspired by the poem I wrote yesterday about my struggles ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Hi AbduBinSaj8! I've seen this work lurking on YWS since you first posted it yesterday, but I was hesitant to read it. A title like "We Hire Women Only" implies ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you believe in the power of new beginnings

    Hi, EditorAndPerks! I'm not sure if I ever reviewed one of your works before, but I saw this lurking in the Green Room and just had to check it out. ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: the christmas musings of a muslim

    Note: This review has been deleted
    I don't think I can possibly critique this essay, but I just wanted to leave a comment to say how much I love it. I currently go back and forth ...

    Dec 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: A Day Off Part 3

    Hello again! I'm here to review the final part of your short story. :) Great job balancing the action, dialogue and descriptions in this part! Out of all three sections ...

    Nov 16, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Day Off Part 2

    Hi again! I'm back to review the second part of your short story. :) I knew they'd run into some kind of trouble! I wasn't sure what kind of trouble ...

    Nov 16, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: A Day Off Part 1

    Hi HarryHardy! I'm finally here to review your work - sorry I took so long! After reading the first part of your short story, I'm starting to suspect I'll be ...

    Nov 16, 2020
  • Art » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Bakit Ang Kyot Mo (A Unique Salonga Fan Fiction)

    Hi, JEAN_447! I'm don't know Filipino, so I apologize in advance if any of my review misinterprets the actual content of your fanfiction. Google Translate isn't the best at translating ...

    Nov 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: A distant love

    Hi there, iframukadam2006! I saw you just joined the site today, so welcome to YWS. @UsonaNaciisto already beat me to leaving you your first YWS review, but hopefully this second ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Beach

    Hello there, Phillauthet! I saw you just joined YWS today, so welcome to the site.

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: The Echoes of Summer

    Hi there, Tenyo! I'm here to review your work - I just had to check it out after I saw that it was a series of text messages. I've actually ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Writer

    Hi there, midnight-thoughts! I see you just joined YWS today, so welcome to the site.

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Wasting Time

    Hi there, Gem! To start off this review, I think I'll use one of my favorite memes: I technically took summer classes in between the spring and fall semesters this ...

    Sep 13, 2020


I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use".
— Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear