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Wow. I love that. It is so moving, and freeing, and simply warming. I like so many things about this poem, one of those things is the flow. The length ...

Nice! I really like the poem structure! The flow was good. I really liked the way you moved each stanza around, it really made it seem more like his thoughts ...

Haha! This is great! I love how you didn’t just sum it up but put your own heart into it as well. Based off of your name and poem I ...

Wow! You said you weren’t good at poetry! This is amazing! The symbolism, the perspective, the meaning, it is amazing! I particularly like the comparison of the porcelain legs vs ...

This is such a heartfelt poem, I have a brother and a cousin that are autistic. There are so many struggles and I won’t say that I know what it ...

Wow! I like the poem. I feel like it is something a lot of people relate to which is hard, but you phrased it very eloquently. It does not rhyme ...

Awwww! This is such an awesome poem! Personally I can’t write poems to save my life but then there are poems like yours! Enough exclamation marks. I really like that ...

Wow, oh my gosh, the very first chapter and it could already make someone cry I bet. This is fantastic writing! I can’t wait to see what happens next, I ...

This is awesome! Doing it from the POV of a demon hunter grandma! I don’t think I have ever read a book from the view point of an old person! ...

I am exited about hearing the rest of this story! The characters are amazing, and I really like how you switch points of view, it really enhances this story. It ...

I love the PoV of this story! The whole mood that you created is very mysterious and charming! I appreciate how poetic your words are and that you didn’t care ...

Oh no! Wow, this is a truly heart wrenching story! Is this the end of the narrative? If it is than I would personally make some things more normal, ( ...

I really like this piece! Is there somewhere I could find the rest of it? You develop the characters very nicely and this was a very emotional part, which is ...

I loved the character building and dialogue of your piece! Luna is a pretty relatable character and everything is pretty realistic. One thing I was confused about was the layout ...