Maddy

Hey Ultraviolet, here as you requested. Plot: You’re plot is intriguing: not completely original, a little bit corny, but definitely interesting. I have notice one major flaw however (I’ve also ...

Hey Shubhi, here as you requested. So, seeing as a fair few people have nitpicked your story to the world’s end for me, I’ll focus on plot. Characters: Ananya: Great ...

Hey skins, my friend :) I have discovered the downfall of this piece: You’re repeating your endings and beginnings too often, and the tone is so casual it hurts. Yep. ...

Hey, Rasca, here as you requested! Because I haven't read the previous 14 chapters of this, I'll just nitpick the grammar. It’s fat limbs were saturated with lights and ornaments ...

This is wasted potential. I have to come out and say it. It needs to be lengthed. Not much description is pointless, but too much, as you have, is lethal ...

Hi Stelagineva, here as you requested. This sounds interesting. Certainly nothing like I've heard. I'm not sure where this is going, but I'm curious. Onto the review: Nitpicks: The streets ...

Hi, I'm Maddy, here to review as you requested. :) Just like to start off saying, this story was great! Nitpicks: Can't do much here, because a lot of people ...

Hey Skins, I'm here! :) Here are my nitpicks: Wow, you really are a ladies man. No wonder you’ve had some many hot girlfriends , I thought to myself sarcastically. ...

Hey Yuri, here as you requested. Nitpicks: “um… Alex, we need to talk , ” I said with a serious voice. “You’re making me nervous than you are, Chloe. We ...

Hey Skins, it's Madz here, as you requested. Nitpicks: Were my parent s trying to fatten me up or something? On my plate there was a huge pile of sliced ...

Me? Investigating a high profile case? I couldn’t believe my ears as the caller on the other end informed me of Amanda Bailey’s demise. Why would anyone kill her? What ...

Hey WritingWords, here as you requested. Plot: Okay, this idea so overdone. The whole high-school issues theme is much too common, but if it's just a quick insight into your ...

Hey, Skins, here as requested. :) Nitpicks: It was just past seven o clock. Her brown eyes narrowed in annoyance at me. Not needed “Fine,” Lisa sighed. “But you’re still ...

with excitement , waking up my wife, Dora. Isn’t that great?” I replied. “Of course it is , but that doesn’t mean you have to wake up the whole neighbourhood ...

‘Just 1411 left!’ {new line} Were you among the ones who took this as a joke? If you were, then you’re in serious need of help. This is not something ...