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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: The Shadow

    Hello there! Rosalía here for a review. First of all, I would like to say that this was a very good poem, and you have chosen an excellent theme for ...

    Nov 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Ode To A Bathroom Mirror

    Hi there! Rosalia here for a quick review. :D First impression: I love the poem, it has a different style than those normally written/seen, but that style which may not ...

    Aug 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: I Remember When Our Future Was Beautiful

    Hello Nikayla! Rosalía here for a review! This poem was just too beautiful for words, and because I am already feeling depressed and terribly sad, this poem has made me ...

    Aug 4, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: titles are as overrated as my talent

    Hello there! I thought I would pop in for a quick review. While reading I felt myself blushing for no apparent reason, and meditating on every sentence written here. What's ...

    Aug 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 22

    Hello! Just pop in for a quick review. Well, overall the chapter was quite interesting and a bit frightening as well, due to the fact that you deal with the ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Junk Food Poetry

    Hello! Found this poem really enjoyable and its in own way quite tasty as well! :wink: (hmm.. There's something wrong there, can a poem be tasty?) If you wanted to ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Let Me Tell You The Truth About This Summer

    Hi! Machupicchu here for a quick review. First of all, great poem and I like the them you have chosen and the way you have developed it. Really enjoyed reading ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Through my fractured eyes...

    Hi! I thought I would pop in, not exactly for a review, but just because I love this poem so much! I honestly think DarshayataDeka has said most of the ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Stray Children Of The Rubbish Heap

    Hi there! I must admit the title and desription of your poem brought me here because it is an issue that concerns us all and one which I find it's ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Stress

    Hi there! The title 'Stress' brought me here and I thought I could write a quick review. I don't know why, but I was feeling so nervous while reading your ...

    Jul 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Lyrical Re: The Teal Knight

    Hi! This poem was simply BRILLIANT! I loved everything about it, the plot, the structure, although I think the rhyme was the sweetener for the enjoyment of it! :D (Just ...

    Jul 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Adiba

    Hi there! I thought I would pop in for a quick review. The poem is beautifully written, and if you send this to the person you miss, I'm pretty sure ...

    Jul 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: break the silence

    Hi! Even the title of the poem told me it was going to be good one. And I wasn't disappointed. The poem is brilliant. Even the shape of it, as ...

    Jul 25, 2017
  • Other » Fantasy, Other Re: Gray

    I don't think this is a proper review but whatever. I just need to say some words. First of all, I'm always amazed by everything you write and this was ...

    Jul 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Tree on her back

    Hi there! After reading this I can just say one word. WOW!!! The poem was just brilliant. Especially the last verse finished the poem in an excellent way. The last ...

    Jul 24, 2017


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening