Lydia1995

Hey :) I'm here to review :) Right so I thought this was good in some ways but it could definately be improved. I'm not going to dwell on nit ...

Hello Persephoneia. Lydia is here to review this. Let's start by saying that I liked it, I haven't read any poems on racism recently and this was a nice change ...

Hello Robster James! Wow I really like this so well done! I thought it captured the rejection but also the feeling of coming back after getting rejected and getting over ...

Hey Lakegirls :) I really liked this. I thought that the repetition of the beginning at the end made it seem almost like a poem. :) It was a really ...

Hello Captain Random's Cousin! And Captain Random! I'm here to review this poem for you both :) Ok, so I liked this but it could be improved so I'm going ...

Hello Sol! Here as requested to review :) It seems as though Yuri and various other people have gone through the little nit-picky grammar things with you and I'm not ...

Hello Helpful McHelpful Pants! I loved these, you had the Sonnet form correct which is great! :) And the subjects are really cool! I have literally nothing bad to say ...

Hello Huthaifa! I liked this! There are a couple of pointers here thought that I would like to go through. English isn't your native language so this is impressive :) ...

Hello Zaddie! I agree that this was a bit all over the place but the imagery you used made up for it. You may want to rearrange some of your ...

Hello Butterfingers! I really liked this, I loved the imagery used. I do agree, however, with Kingolions in that I thought this could have been expanded more. There is so ...

Hello Kingolions! I loved this! There were a couple of little nit-picks I noticed in this but overall it was really touching! Many thing s I have done wrong, but ...

Hello Creative! Back again to review! :) Ok so I liked this but not as much as your first one if I'm being honest. As HBgirl said you broke the ...

Hello Creative! I just reviewed your third Dear Lord poem :) I really enjoyed this. :) Again as I said for your third Dear Lord poem this would benefit from ...

Hello Creative! This was a very short but sweet poem and I kind of wished that you had elaborated more. The message you are conveying is very deep and there ...

Hello Elite Husky! I liked this, to be short and sweet. :) I thought you captured the character of the doctor well. Am I right in thinking that this is ...