Lycando

Hey there! Since this is a scene, I'll try to go more in depth here. First off this scene was pretty well described. I could see the lovemaking pretty clearly ...

Hey there! Overall I felt that the structure of this poem was confusing. The sentences were split up far too much, and the flow became very disrupted. Combine the whole ...

Hey there! Now from the first chapter to this, I don't see an actual link. Sure Mitch is still there, but where has the girl gone? Why does Mitch seem ...

Hello there again! I'm back to review the fourth chapter! Now this is getting interesting, we're finally at the ball! Now not that I really mind, but I would rather ...

Hey there! Since I've read the past two chapters, I'll read this too! I like it that you start of this chapter with the mysterious voice. I really does hope, ...

Hey there! This story was interesting and it's concept was easy to grasp. Now it's not the most wonderful type of work that has many areas that leaves readers guessing, ...

Hey there! This story was pretty interesting, but unfortunately it didn't have that wow factor to it. What I mean is I didn't feel at the edge of my seat ...

Hey there! So first thing I have to say is this story felt very rushed and there seemed to be a lack of description. What I mean by that is ...

Hey there! First off I'm liking the way this develops. It's becoming more and more interesting, and the characters of Auxi and Zach. Auxi keeps her playful kind of character ...

Hey there! I really liked this story. It's a mixture of the mischievousness of Auxi and the seriousness of Jack. The two contrasting characters make this story very interesting to ...

Hey there! I really liked this story. I can somehow guess what really happened originally, but you were able to weave a story about this which I find wonderful. Egor ...

Hey there! Alright, don't mind me being harsh on this one. I usually am not with reviews but this just may be one of the few... First off, this story ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this piece, talking about humans from a rats point of view and also making them seem like an army of rats who have ranks within ...

Hey there again! Now this part of the story is where Neon seems really frustrated with her life and it shows in all her thoughts and complaints. Somehow I get ...

Hey there! First off I did like this story, it's full of thought and emotion from the princess. Her annoyance at her own life and wanting to change it shows ...