Lycando

Alirght Pande, I'm here to review, but no worries I'm not the tear apart your story and put you down type. In fact I really enjoyed this, the story itself ...

Alright so after reading this, I have to say I'm pretty intrigued by this piece. It's unique on it's own, with the narration from the character being very descriptive and ...

Hey there! So I kind of get this scene. I call it a scene because it seems more like it than anything else. It's mainly a conversation between two characters ...

Hey there! Now the first thing that caught my eye was the fact that Samuel G Lee invented the Hologram. And I had a big expectation of it playing a ...

Hey there! First off I liked this story. It was short, and simple. No doubt this could have been longer but for 250 words this is well done. Some sentences ...

Alright I have to say I enjoy this alot. Talking about your diary like it's a living thing. Lot's of people do that but you actually place it in words. ...

Hey there, I liked this poem very much. It shows the true beauty of the night, and the life that comes from it. The formatting may be a little messed ...

Hey there! I like this story, although rewording and rephrasing to give the story more of an dramatic effect is in order. The sentences in this are pure thoughts, and ...

Alright this was actually a good read, but confusing at parts. I like the concept of this, but I feel it wasn't explained enough, I wanted to look back at ...

Hi there! Well I must agree with John, this story has a pretty fast progression. The conversation was short, and monotonous. I would have like to see more conversation between ...

Hi there, after reading this I have a few things to say! First off, I love reading this. The words you use are very descriptive, and draws the character in ...

Hey there, I really liked this story! The concept of having two different POVs in a story is not unheard of, but having a lion as one of them certainly ...

Alright! Haven't reviewed in awhile so it's a little rusty, but I'll do my best. First off, caps. Yes I know her mum is shouting and it's as loud as ...

Hey there! First of all, I like the emotions portrayed in this! I liked the words you used to describe how the girl felt. It was dramatic and touching. It ...

Hey there! Ok first off I enjoyed this story. It's like the long distance relationship between a guy and a girl. It's cliche but it's good. I like the beginning, ...