Lycando

Hey there, Lycando here to review! I really really really like this! You had me hooked from the start and left me hanging at the end! I'm dangling upon the ...

Hey there, Lycando here to review! Okay first off there were some punctuation mistakes that made certain sentences sound kind of weird. looking down at the angel cascaded in a ...

Hey there, Lycando here to review! Alright so first off, there were a couple of grammatical mistakes here and there... Once before he had fled before the enemy. You don't ...

Hey there, Lycando here to review! Right, I'll start on the nitpicks first! Unlike the rest of the day, time begins to slow in this class. I wouldn't use begin ...

Hey there, Lycando here to review! I really liked how you started off with that air of mystery, it got me hooked up straight off! But I agree with steampowered, ...

Hey there, here to review! Okay so I shall critique each part first, followed by the piece as a whole! My head hurt as if someone put a metal rod ...

Hey there, here to review! I like what you have going on here, it's a good mixture of dialogue, narration and conflict. The character build up here is good, especially ...

Hey there, here to review! Wow, I must say that even though I understood where this was headed, there were some major parts that stood out for me. ‘Don’t say, ...

Hey there, back to review the second part! I like how you started off with the interaction. Gets the reader straight into seeing how the characters behave and also reveal ...

Hey there, here to review! I really liked this piece, even though there wasn't any use of bombastic words or extremely vivid imagery. It was just this simplicity that was ...

Hey there, here to review! I really like this lyrical piece, given that I'm a Christian myself :P The only critique I can really give here is probably grammar and ...

Oh my...I really really loved this. Okay first of all let me begin by saying that you've touched on a topic which I myself am very interested in, freedom of ...

Hey there, here to review! I really liked this piece! Now I'm not a huge fan of fantasy due to the fact that the stories sometimes get too draggy but ...

Hey there, I really like this! I think this really gets the reader thinking about what success truly is. It's a thought provoking story that embodies a greater meaning. However ...

Hey there, here to review! I didn't read Chapter 1 so my critique will be solely based on this chapter alone. To start things off, I can't say there's really ...