LunarAirPollution

Hi! I really liked this piece. The rhythm flows very nicely and makes it a super smooth read and the rhyme scheme ties it together very well. You set a ...

Ellie, I seriously admire this piece! I feel a strong sense of rage and desperation throughout it that I think really brings out the imperativeness of your words. I really ...

Thanks for sharing! This piece was a very fun read. You paint a vivid picture of loss and conjure a lingering sense of helplessness. My favorite line of this poem ...

Hi and thanks for sharing this piece! This was a super interesting read and I always enjoy any poem that makes me have to reread it and try thinking about ...

Wow! I really enjoyed reading this piece. Thought relatively short, you were able to pack in lots of descriptive language and create a lovely scene. My non-literal interpretation of this ...

Wow, this piece is heartbreaking and nostalgic but also so beautiful. I found it very relatable and reminiscent. I especially liked the descriptive lines about missing parts of childhood like ...

Wow, first of all great job! This piece was a super interesting read that clearly tells a story of regret and loss. Your word choice really sets a tone of ...

This piece seems to juxtapose the experiences of someone who is young versus someone who is older. Both experiences present challenges and leave readers with a sense that the subjects ...

Wow, this piece very clearly conveys a heavy sense of grief and pain. I especially appreciated the consistently revisited imagery and analogy of the pain/grief as a journey/path that must ...

Wow this is really gorgeously written! I am not sure if this is the intended interpretation, but what I got from it was a really lovely tale of a since ...

Hi! This was such a cool story concept; you did well bringing it to life. You did a great job building up Ronny's storytelling to the climax of the story ...

Hi! This piece of writing really hit home for me. You truly encapsulated the often turbulent sibling relationship that I think many siblings experience. At the same time, you touched ...

Hi, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I thought you made great use of imagery throughout this work. You eloquently illustrated not just what the narrator is seeing, but also ...