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Ooh! I really like this 3B! But...I agree with the others...the first stanza is a tad different and unrelated to the rest of the story.... All in all I liked ...

Oh, wow! I really liked this! Amazing truely! ~Lulu

I agree with Lottie... Wow Kitty... You Death poem was great...but what happened here? It's like you dropped a grand piano on your head and then wrote this. I'm not ...

Yay! Awesome Amber-chan! Can't wait for chapter two! *Does a dance* Awesome Amber-chan! ~Lulu

I like this OverEasy. It flows great in my opinion... But then again the others don't agree with me. But, still in my opinion I like it! Alot! Great, Awesome, ...

Hey Kitty! I liked this alot! I understand it very well and I love it! Keep it up! ~Lulu

It was good. I favored it more than other books. They have a movie for it to I believe but it is nowhere as near as good as the actual ...

I did read these...snuck them from my mom...Amazing books! I did read them and I too gained a crush on Marcus...*sigh* But it wasn't as great as Twilight...

Wow Over... This is amazing! Other than the few things the others pointed out it looks really great! Keep it up! ~Lulu

WOW! :shock: I really liked this! It was really amazing! I don't usually crit poetry but I had to crit on this piece! Simply amazing! ~Lulu

Great poem! I liked it alot! Simply awesome! ~Lulu

I agree with Fall...Wow. Haha anyway this was really good! I love how much discription it has in it! I can't write that well when it comes to discription but ...

So sad. :'( Anyway, great job OverEasy. I'm very strung on this! Can't wait to read more...even though it is sad. ~Lulu

Darn. Azila beat me to all the big things. Oh well. I liked this one alot! I've been wondering what was going on back with all the others. Thanks for ...

Thanks everyone! I'll be sure to fix this up!