LukanRinta

Oh my gosh, thank you so much. xD You're going to give me more confidence than I should probably have though, haha. If I ever add more I'll definitely let ...

It was a school project, I simply followed the criteria. I don't remember the main point anymore. I believe it was an experience that taught us a life lesson. We ...

It's not meant to be connected, it's meant to be choppy. It tells a story. It kind of tells two stories. Lines 1,3,5,etc for the first four stanzas tell the ...

Hi. Your poem was beautiful! It reminds me exactly how I felt when me and my boyfriend were going through a rough patch. Was it based on you? You need ...

This isn't the original version of the poem, but I personally think it's much better than the original... So enjoy and please comment!!

This was very good. The first line was very unexpected, but that drew me to read the next line and so on. Great job! Keep writing! ~Lukan

I'm sorry for this not being so clear, but yes, it is a prologue. When I wrote it, I kinda scribbled it out, wondering if I should or shouldn't have ...

This was very very good. The only thing was that you had almost no punctuation except for question marks. That kinda threw off the rhythm, though I kinda put in ...

My teacher left a note at the bottom of my paper when he handed it back to me. This is what it said. Lukan, Your story ACTUALLY gave me the ...

Thank you for all your reveiws!! And I just want to say that I use the topic of love and marriage because I find that I'm drawn to it, and ...

sadly i am stuck in writing novels! psh, like im ever going to finish one of those, eh? nice work~ SJS Stuck writing novels? lol I know how that feels. ...

Aww. Please tell me if this is real or not. I have to know!!! Okay, down to business.(rolls up sleeves) This poem flows beautifully, I love how you rhym on ...

I didn't have much rhythm in this one. I wrote it as a journal entry to remember a dream I had once. It had no structure at first, but I ...

This is one of my shorter ones that I chose to put on the site before my others. Please tell me if you think I could improve it in any ...