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Re: Dragon Market chapter two edited
Wow! This was different, I don't think I've ever read a story in the perspective of a dragon. This held my attention from begging to end and i am craving ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: What REALLY Happens In Middle School Ch.1
This is good, I really liked it. I spotted a few common errors here and there. Just a few, but make sure you double check your work. I'll remember to ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: The River Song
Wow, I really liked this. I didn't see any mistakes, but just remember to double check your work anyway. Is this a short story or a novel? I would really ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Wrists in Red
Wow, this was nice, very emotional. I liked it. I didn't see any errors, but then again, I almost never do. Just pay attention to what you write and make ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: I Always Wondered...
Hi! I really liked this. It's a true story you say? Well that only makes me want to read it more. You did have a few errors, though. "I was ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Whiplashed
Well, I noticed you don't have any reviews, try to fix that. This was nice, I really enjoyed reading it. I'm sorry I don't have time to correct any mistakes ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Made In China Prolouge
Wow this was very good! Its Summer, by the way, nice to meet you. I didn't see very many grammatical errors. The only thing that bothered me a bit was ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Flight: un-retirement chapter one: Briefing
I know how you feel. When I was new I didn't want to put up my work because I thought it would be utter garbage. I had a lot of ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Keeper: [1] *edited*
This was really good. I didn't see any mistakes, but I almost never do. I think everyone else covered your errors already though. I can't stay long because i have ...
Oct 16, 2009 -
Re: Body, Mind, and Soul
I liked this I just wish it was longer, but there are a few things. 1. I didn't know what it meant, or even who Kayla was. This sentence was ...
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Finders, Keepers
Well, I wasn't sure about this, at first, and I knew I shouldn't judge books by their cover. I'm glad i didn't. This was amazing! It had me giggling and ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Prologue - Pawns (Stand in Name) - Novel
Holy pumpkins and grape juice! This was awesome! I am craving for more! Wowza (And again, another story has reduced me to using made up words.) I can hardly wait ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Gothic beginnings....
Hehe, this seems right up my alley! There is only one part, though, that I saw that bothered me. As it approached Max, Max was unable to move shocked and ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: reversed rewind (standalone)
Hey, I really liked this, is there going to be more? I hope this is not all of it, that would be utterly disappointing! I'm interested to see what will ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: He Is My Wind (Pt. 2)
Yay! Part two! *pumps fist in air* Oh wow! This was a work of pure genius! Cheif Nodin, hehe, I love that name! Hania is so sweet! Well, that's all, ...
Oct 3, 2009