Published November 6, 2009
I took this knife to my vein,
Because I feel I'm going insane.
And I bleed in the dark,
Just to make one more mark.
I feel the need,
to continue to bleed.
The sight is so empowering,
But the cutting is just devouring.
And the rush of it all,
Right before I fall,
Is every reason more,
To do it again.
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WOW! That was great. Umm i didnt see any gramatical errors so ur doing good with that, and i liked the way the lines rhyme, it makes it a little more appealing to some people. In total liked it and please tell me ur not emo!!! if so try to stop cutting (:
Wow, this was nice, very emotional. I liked it. I didn't see any errors, but then again, I almost never do. Just pay attention to what you write and make sure you spell check and grammar check it before you post. Last thing, I noticed you don't have any reviews, fix that.
Well, that's all, bye-bye!
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