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Hello! Thank you so much for your review! I'll make sure to look into all you said when I make edits!

Ahhhhhh. Okay! My pleasure!

Hi! Thank you so much for the review!!! I can see how the middle is confusing. She's trying to kill herself (she slit major arteries) and her love is trying ...

My pleasure! Best of luck with the competition!!!

Thank you so much!

Hello! The italics is the narrator speaking to herself. the "once more" part is her wishing to hear her name one last time without telling her love it is the ...

Hi! This is the death of a person is all. They hung themself (hence the bruised neck). The wedding to Death is dying. White for the wedding dress or another ...

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:) I loved it though. It gave me perspective and brightened my day!

Hi! Thank you so much for your kind words!!!! Inspiration comes from myself and my life. I would love to look at your poem!!!!

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Thanks!

Thank you!!

Sure!! Always glad to listen!!

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Woah. Hello there! This was a lot within a short amount. I was expecting more, honestly, but I kind of like it short :) First, in the first line, "mama ...