Lost_in_dreamland

Lauren, I absolutely adore this piece, it's so simple yet perfect. It rings with that clarity of soul and beauty of words that is yours. Anyway, I haven't done a ...

twenty-two Hi Hannah, I'm here to do the first of the two critiques you requested (: I rather liked this piece but I do have some suggestions and ideas on ...

Twenty One Helllo there again, Lily. I like this piece a lot more than the other piece that I reviewed, it was just a lot more original and creative, not ...

Twenty Hello there, Lilymoore. My apologies for taking so long to review this. Anyway, this is just about the farthest away from the normal type of fiction that I like, ...

nineteen Hello there, yrclever. I must say that I found this rather enjoyable, although I do have my requests and ideas of what to fix. Anyway, I've done a line ...

eighteen Hey there, imapoemperson, can I call you some form of abbreviation? Anyway, I don't really have much to say on this poem, there wasn't too much philosophy in it, ...

seventeen Hey there Woolster. Thanks for posting on my will review for food thread. I enjoyed this, it is not the type of fiction that I normally read, but it ...

Just so you know, you shouldn't post songs in the lyric poetry section, lyric poetry and lyrics are not the same, we have a lyric section for all the budding ...

fourteen Hey, thanks for requesting a review in my will review for food thread. Please excuse me if I miss out a letter or an apostrophe as my laptop is ...

thirteen Hey Jon :D Kirsten here. Please excuse me if I accidentally miss out a letter or an apostrophe, blame my sister for spilling lemonade on my laptop. xD I ...

twelve Right, I'm going to attempt reviewing this, as Monument said this isn't the greatest piece of work every written, but some of the concepts are fine and could perhaps ...

Ten Lauren 8) Please excuse me if I accidentally miss out a letter or an apostrophe as my laptop doesn't like lemonade, how shocking? I love reviewing anything by Lauren. ...

nine Hey there, I liked the title and so decided to read your poem, I review all poems that I read, just to be fair, so I've come to review ...

eight Hi there, Erica. Please excuse me if I miss out a letter or an apostrophe as I have recently discovered that laptops don't take to lemonade as I do. ...

seven Hey there, another random piece I have chosen to review, and I stumbled upon you. xD Now, let's see... I really enjoyed this piece. Many things contributed to this, ...