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Hey there, Wolfare1! The beginning of this chapter was very ominous, and full of some of the most powerful descriptions I have ever seen, it was beautifully written, well done! ...

Hi, Cookie64! Crikey that was brilliant! Such a fast paced and unusual storyline, I was hooked the whole time!This strange kid has certainly caught my attention, how he has stated ...

Hi, LordofLit here, This is quite an emotive yet powerful beginning, or prologue. I can see the rest of this will be truly emotive and just as powerfully written, your ...

Hi, Lordoflit here, What a mystical and mythical start! I can already see that this story is going to be action packed and very fast paced, I can't wait for ...

Hey there, LordofLit here, Awesome start! I love a good chase scene, especially when you threw us into the action like that, brilliant! This whole world seems pretty cool, I ...

Hi! LordofLit here, This is a good start to your story, and by the way I like the name Hexamon. Your descriptions are quite good, it's practically like the man ...

Hey there, AlexisFerguson! There is only one thing I can say about this; WOW! This is truly an awesome start, the way you just threw us into the emotional action ...

Hi, whoaitsbritt! This is brilliant, the descriptions are incredibly put together! I love how you've described every scene and thrown us into a new one practically every minute. The look ...

Hey, me again! This is a really good continuation, I like how you've toned the atmosphere down by expressing the beauty of the surrounding environment, it felt like i was ...

Hey WriterXAnonymous, This is a brilliant start to your novel, I like how emotional it is. Believe me if I were there, I too, I would've flat out killed the ...

Hey there, WritingRose! I must say this was very ominous yet funny in itself, what a great combination of contexts! I've never seen that being done before but wow! It ...

Hi! What a great start, really mysterious and it kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time! There's just one or two things you need to correct: ...

This is an ominous start, I saw the description of your overall novel and I'm already anticipated about this! I love how mysterious the main character seems, yet I like ...

Hey there! Good start! I like how casual you've made the scene out to be, just kids being kids, but then smashing that with the concept of a time travel ...

Well you said this would appeal to those who love a bit of historical context, and you weren't wrong! What a start! I love how you've mirrored some of the ...