LordofLit101

Hey Yizhongt! LordofLit here for a review! Starting off with a slow pace of story telling, then BOOM! I was not expecting that! The final part was fast paced, I ...

Hey Yizhongt! LordofLit here to review this chapter as I promised! Well what can I say, another brilliant chapter! The original spell names and what they do is very imaginative, ...

Hey there, Sothisonekidwrites! LordofLit101 here for a review! This story is already off to a great start, your descriptions are incredible, and your concept is amazing, the fact of a ...

Hey Ezzie01, LordofLit here. I'm not going to do a proper review. I just wanted to tell you that in some areas of this story I felt that was just ...

Hey Yizhongt, LordofLit here for a review. In this chapter you've sort of taken your foot off the pedal with the storyline a bit more and made it even more ...

Hi Yizhongt, as I promised, I'm here for a review on this again really enticing piece! Yet another great installment to your story, I am again captured in trying to ...

It's a bad bad bad world Boom! I decoded it! Anyway, Hello, jumpingsheep, LordofLit here for a review! This is quite the intriguing piece, many historical references here, I managed ...

Hey there, 21gmu! LordofLit here for a review! Again, just like the last chapter, a very well described and enticing piece! This story line is on a good path, but ...

Hello, 21gmu! LordofLit here for a review on this chapter! Let me start by saying that your imagery is very good, the use of personification to describe this black hole. ...

Hey Yizhongt, LordofLit here, sorry for the late review, been a busy week! Anyway, let me start off by saying that like the last chapter, this is a well written ...

Hello, Megrim, This is an excellent start and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this! The story is set on another planet, I was sure of that, but are ...

Hi, yizhongt! LordofLit here for a review! This is quite a good start, you've already got me interested about the storyline, and I know it is going to be fast ...

Hi, Dreamworx95, LordofLit here for a review! This is just one chapter in and I'm already interested! You gave me something to relate to in the first few paragraphs, because ...

Hi, LordofLit here, Very good start, you've mad everything seem pretty down toned and casual at first, to lure the reader into a false sense of security. I like the ...

Hi, GeeLyria. I'm LordofLit here for a review! This is a very powerful expression of what growing up to this society is really like. I got the image from it ...