Lollipop

That happens to me too Bob! Anyway, I agree with Sam, this could turn out great!! :D

I thought this was really good. I don't think I have any critz. Looking forward to next chapter! :D

What you tryin'! Hey judy! Cool little poem!

Wow! Truly amazing! I agree, it's beautiful! :D

Yeah this is soo good! You have such a cool avvie. Did you make it yourself?

I like the flow of this poem! It's good to see someone using short sweet sentences instead of huge, long ones!

I agree, this is really different fron the rest of the poems on here, thats what makes it so original. good job!

WOW!....This is full of emotion and I can see your really upset about your family problems right now. Thumbs up!!

I agree. You made the story seem so real. It's amazing!

WOW! I thought that was awesome!! Post more chapters please!!

Another great chapter!! Watch out for the semicolons in the wrong place.

This was great. I noticed how the 'don't's have semicolons too. But other than that, a great chapter.

Heehee!!!Thanks!! I'll change it!

OMG! Thanks! People always slag my stories but you said a good thing about them hehe thanks so much!! :D

Any comments people??