Littlewing

Hello, littlewing here :) I feel like this is so almost a good poem. I understand that perhaps you have tried to make the simplicity of the poem a feature, ...

Hello, littlewing here :) I love the theme of your poem - I can definitely relate to that contemplative feeling you get when you stare out of the window some ...

Hello, littlewing here. I don't know much about poetry, so sorry if this review doesn't remotely do justice to your beautiful poem! In short, I loved it. The flawless rhythm, ...

Very interesting poem - I like it... I love how it takes hold of each example, and then show a different perspective. I particularly liked the lightning verses: "I wish ...

The integrity of this poem really shines through - it evidently comes from the heart and it is this that makes it stand out. From a literary point of view, ...

This starts off beautifully! I love the idea of God sitting on a cloud, creating people who are "always meant to be". The words you have used weave such a ...

Hello! I liked the bare, severe feel of your poem - I feel that you increase the emotion in the poem by not over-ornamenting it. A few spelling errors: 'distrought' ...

Great poem :) I love the description and imagery in the second stanza, however I also feel it stands out a bit from the rest - being longer and having ...

Well done - this is a nice piece of writing! I agree with the previous reviewer that there a quite a few grammatical errors, which would be worthwhile correcting. As ...