LittlePetRock

And all the dudes are lining up cause they hear we’re fo’ show But we kick ‘em to the curb unless they look like Jack Sparrow This. Is. EPIC! Do ...

I still love this story... I'm glad you are continuing this! Luckily , Mrs. Murray hadn’t caught me texting. Nit-picks... (dun dun dunnnn) Be more descriptive! How does she feel ...

Hiya there!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Anything that has to do with spies I instantly love. Nit-picks: Being a multi-millionaire is the last thing CIA agents want. It ...

:O I like this story, allot. You must PM me when you post more! I shall review this in pretty purple !! One nit-pick: Tears burned my eyes and left ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm LittlePetRock, but everyone calls me LPR or Rocky. I really, really like this story so far. You must post more of this, you must! ...

Hey Nike, I'm here to review! I agree with Amie, you need to thicken your story up a bit, add some description to it. Describe the protagonists, the room they ...

Hiya stelagineva! I'm here at your request! I like this story, very weird indeed. :) I love the different points of view! I shall review this in pretty purple ! ...

'Ello shubhi! I really, really liked this story! Please don't stop writing this! No nit-picks to point-out, which is good. I shall review this in Beautiful Blue ! “Would you ...

Hi there Nike! (nice username :) ) I like your story so far! I shall review this in ravishing red ! Nit-Picks: Be sure to always capitalize your 'I' and ...

Hello dasiamari!! Honestly, this is too short for me to fully review it. Perhaps try filling it out more? Be sure to make a new paragraph after every bit of ...

Heya Forest!! This story sucked me into a daydream... That never happens. Bravo!! I shall review this in pretty pink , why? Because I can :P Far away from the ...

Hello Scarlett!! I liked this story. Zombies and two kids trying to make it out alive = epic! I cannot wait for the continuation! I shall review this in outrageous ...

Hello Rayquazakid! I've never heard of Myst, but I'm here at your request. :) I shall review this is beautiful blue. Nitpick: It seems a bit dull to me, try ...

Hey Ranger!! I love this story. It combines three of my favorite things, spies, fantasy, and medieval times! I found a few grammar mistakes. Luckily no nit-picks to blabber about. ...

Hello! I'm here at your request! :D I really liked this prologue, it draws you in as soon as you begin reading it. I greatly hope you continue this! I ...