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Re: For You
I absolutely loved it! it's short, sweet, and to the point! Also, you've got some fancy skill with rhyme and fluency! Great job! -LLW
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: The Sun Sets In The North
This is another pretty deep thing, so if you don't exactly get it, chill out. No need to set this piece a flame. But I would like to say that ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Wow that was intense. Great job. It gave me the chills multiple times, and kept me hooked. Wow. Just, Wow.
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
hahaha! That's hilarious! I totally agree i cringe when people where 5 sizes too small in anything especially shorts! Great job! Love the cleaver rhymes especially the priest start swearing!
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Have You Lost Me
wow, this is really good! A bit depressing, but good nonetheless. I wish I could actually hear it! Awesome job! :D
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: To Wander Without Walking
I would just like to say one thing. I know that this story can get a bit complex, but there's no need to flame about it. If you don't get ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Silent Screaming
Honestly most of my poems are like pictures in my head then I describe them. I suppose with Silent Screaming i'm trying to signify the fact that people are frozen ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
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I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day But took the cat instead.'" I thought ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
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I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day But took the cat instead.'" I thought ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Dear Brother
I totally agree with you sare, i reread clay's response multiple times each time I did a little awww. You sound like a REALLY good brother!
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Father Time
AWESOME. Great Job! I love it!
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: The Way I Hide
Yeah i was going for the blank poem. Also honestly nothing was really going on. . . I wrote it in like spring and I just had this weird feeling ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Classifieds
Wow. That's very. . . powerful. I'm kind of speechless.
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Guardian of an Angel.
amazing poem. great fluency and strong wording. Really powerful, sends me the chills.
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Yellowhammer
I love this poem sooo much! it's so cleaver and cute! You mixed the perfect brew of witty-ness and meaning. It's by far the best poem I read since I ...
Jun 12, 2011
