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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: For You

    I absolutely loved it! it's short, sweet, and to the point! Also, you've got some fancy skill with rhyme and fluency! Great job! -LLW

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Sun Sets In The North

    This is another pretty deep thing, so if you don't exactly get it, chill out. No need to set this piece a flame. But I would like to say that ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Mr. Rapist

    Wow that was intense. Great job. It gave me the chills multiple times, and kept me hooked. Wow. Just, Wow.

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Booty Shorts

    hahaha! That's hilarious! I totally agree i cringe when people where 5 sizes too small in anything especially shorts! Great job! Love the cleaver rhymes especially the priest start swearing!

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Have You Lost Me

    wow, this is really good! A bit depressing, but good nonetheless. I wish I could actually hear it! Awesome job! :D

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Wander Without Walking

    I would just like to say one thing. I know that this story can get a bit complex, but there's no need to flame about it. If you don't get ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Silent Screaming

    Honestly most of my poems are like pictures in my head then I describe them. I suppose with Silent Screaming i'm trying to signify the fact that people are frozen ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re:

    I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day But took the cat instead.'" I thought ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re:

    I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day But took the cat instead.'" I thought ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Brother

    I totally agree with you sare, i reread clay's response multiple times each time I did a little awww. You sound like a REALLY good brother!

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Father Time

    AWESOME. Great Job! I love it!

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Way I Hide

    Yeah i was going for the blank poem. Also honestly nothing was really going on. . . I wrote it in like spring and I just had this weird feeling ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Classifieds

    Wow. That's very. . . powerful. I'm kind of speechless.

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Guardian of an Angel.

    amazing poem. great fluency and strong wording. Really powerful, sends me the chills.

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Yellowhammer

    I love this poem sooo much! it's so cleaver and cute! You mixed the perfect brew of witty-ness and meaning. It's by far the best poem I read since I ...

    Jun 12, 2011


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