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Hello again, Messenger! This one will be a pretty quick review. To begin with, I take back what I said in the last review; I pointed out that the Sadorians ...

Mm, good development so far. I'm starting to like this. Here's my feedback for this chapter. A dozen coin-shaped stones rolled out. Each one a hue of honey-brown or amber ...

Ooh, POV change! I approve! I love books that have multiple POV characters. That said, this is a very smooth chapter, and I have just a couple of nitpicks: Carris ...

Hello again! I'm here right after finishing the first chapter. After reading previous reviews I realise you actually made an effort to change some things, which is quite commendable. Overall, ...

Hello, Messenger! You probably don't remember, but around last June I reviewed one of your chapters for The Great Tortoise Race of 2020. I think. Or it was for Review ...

Hey there, Words! I'm a little late, but welcome to YWS! It's nice to see someone new active around here. And you wrote such a lovely poem! To begin with, ...

Hey there, pineapple, I hope you're having a good day and staying as safe as you can! When I read the title, I immediately thought of the song The Sound ...

Hey there Phil! It's a nice poem you've got here, but I'd like to tentatively point out that its accuracy is rather questionable, and as such a lot of non-Indians ...

Hi there, Livi! You pointed me to this poem, so here I am! Let's start. Once again, I can relate to certain parts of this poem, which makes me like ...

Hey, LiviK! Welcome to YWS! Man. I love this poem. I really do. It's very well written, raw and powerful, highly relatable, and is able to move me quite strongly. ...

Hello again, Blue! It's really nice to see one of your works every day! You're a pretty good writer, and I like the themes you work with. I'll begin by ...

Gosh. I'm not entirely sure what the moral is... help those in need or you will lack it when you need it? Be nice or you'll experience karma? Or, considering ...

Hi, BlueGlow! It's nice to see another one of your poems up so soon! Once again, the topic you've chosen is interesting and with a lot of potential! We all ...

Hey, quitecontrary! Hmm, it's been a while since I last reviewed a chapter on YWS. It gives me a fresh perspective, I guess. To begin with, I'll give you my ...

BlueGlow, this is a really nice poem. It's thought-provoking and rather fit for today's world. While reading it, I felt a flurry of emotions. Oddly enough, one of them was ...