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LittleLee

Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination.

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Aspirations and Realities

    Hello, anne, Lee's here for a review! I hope my review doesn't offend you in any way. Well, I''l get to it without further ado. The very first point I ...

    Jun 8, 2020
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: ​Stream of Consciousness

    Hi, Darren! I think I'll be frank. This essay was really difficult to read. There are no paragraphs whatsoever, making it look like an unappealing chunk of text. The lack ...

    Jun 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Goodbye, Precious Gold

    Hi there, Em16! Going to drop a review here. I want to say this before I start; the imagery in the first few verses caught my attention. It's really well ...

    Jun 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Valkyrie's Dream: Chapter 1.2

    Here comes another member of Team Tortoise for a review! I am enjoying this story. I haven't followed many novels on YWS, but this one drew my attention and I'm ...

    Jun 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: A Valkyrie's Dream: Chapter 1

    Hi, Shade! To begin with, wow. This story is one of the best I've read on YWS. Good grammar, no spelling mistakes, and an interesting plot with a good narrative. ...

    Jun 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Man's Aimless Trek

    Hi, Lee here to drop a review. Sort of. I'm sorry to say I gave up reading this after the first dozen or so lines. Like @IamI mentioned, I highly ...

    Jun 6, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Victory

    Hi there, Lewis! I'm over to drop a review. I really liked reading this short story, for various reasons: Your grammar is very good, with only one glaring mistake that ...

    Jun 5, 2020
  • Art » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Guilt

    Hi, Lee's here to review your poem! I enjoyed reading both. There's a good choice of words, substantial imagery, and the topics themselves are pretty interesting. However, allow me to ...

    Jun 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Night

    Hi Jess! It's an interesting topic that you have chosen. There are so many things one can say about the night, which makes it a good descriptive poem. But there's ...

    Jun 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Fool

    Hey, JellyRose! To begin with, your poem is short, simple, and yet has some gravity. To me, it was because of the abrupt death and the title. I enjoyed reading ...

    Jun 3, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Hourglass

    Hey, Little's here for a review! I'll begin with criticism. Please note that I mean no offense and I just want to help! the smoke, like a ghost, fades with ...

    Jun 2, 2020
  • Other » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Pain For The Game

    Hello, Catamp! LittleLee's here for a review. To begin with, I really like the idea of the story. I didn't understand the ending, though. It was very vague and random. ...

    Jun 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Slave Girl: Chapter 1

    Hi! Wow. I'm quite impressed. The story is very nicely written, with great grammar and no spelling mistakes that I could find. The descriptions are adequate, the setting good, the ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Great story, here I come to review! I know you asked for criticism, but I apologise if any of my remarks offend you in any way. I'm only attempting to ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Science, Culture Re: matricide

    Hi alliyah! I love the poem. it's wonderful, and being an environmentalist at heart, I really appreciate this piece. It's well-written and reads smoothly. I admire how the poem is ...

    May 25, 2020


An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming.
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