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Re: Why Can't We?
Hello, Sophie! I'm Lee, here fifteen years too late to review your poem. I hope some day you read my review, but for whatever it's worth, I'll put it up ...
Sep 8, 2020 -
Re: Crippling Procrastination
Hello, Connie! I'll say straight off I didn't find the secret message, partly because I'm too lazy myself but shh, but I did like the poem. The sense of how ...
Sep 7, 2020 -
Re: The Act
Hey there, oceans! The title caught my eye, and I wasn't disappointed. Your poem is a stark address to society today; the last lines especially made this clear, and they ...
Sep 6, 2020 -
Re: hurt
Hey there bluecows! You'll probably never see this review, but in case you do, I hope you find it useful. I do not who you are referring to in this ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: Shadow
Hey Ethan, I see Tuck and mel beat me to reviewing this, but I'll share my thoughts anyway. :D Overall, I'd give you a thumbs-up. I don't read flash fiction ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: Theory of Evolution Rewritten
Hey there, Scribbler, I'm Lee and here to review your wonderful little poem! I'll begin by saying the idea is fascinating. A writer, being the Creator of the universe as ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: Friendly kidnappers V2
Hey there, MoonIris, I'm Lee, and here for a review. I'll get right to it. Please note that I mean no offence and sincerely want to help you improve your ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: As the Wind Sways Me
Hi, Gem, it's Lee again. I haven't designed a decent banner yet, but happy #RevMo ! Without further ado, I'll begin. As a self-proclaimed environmentalist, I have to say this ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: Picturesque
Hey, Gem, it's great to see you've had a great rush of poetic inspiration! Lots of stuff in the Green Room, hehe. Let's get this one out. I recall you ...
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: Art
Hi, Rascalover, I'm Lee! I haven't written a review in just about a million days, so bear with me. :D To begin with, it looks good, but the font and ...
Aug 22, 2020 -
Re: A Note to Life
Hey there, Tanishka! This poem is quite good! The emotions behind the words strike out at the reader, and it's also kind of relatable. I mean, since this is slightly ...
Aug 11, 2020 -
Re: Glitter - Chapter 1
Hello, Shallow! Here I come to review your story! I'll begin by saying it managed to capture my attention, and I'd like to see where the story goes from here. ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: This Caged Thing
Hi Jodo, I'm Lee, and here to review your poem! Oh, and welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy it here, and don't hesitate to ask me about anything ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: 'Shades of Hypocricy'
Here comes Lee to review from the ancient archives of YWS! Greetings, Shadow. To begin with, I like the imagery and the rhythm, but I think some clarity is required ...
Aug 7, 2020 -
Re: rockstars have no hearts
Hello, I'm Lee! I saw this had only one review, so here I am! I'll begin by saying flat-out that I didn't see the relevance of the title in regard ...
Aug 7, 2020
