LittleFox

Hey, Littlefox here to reveiw! I'm officially caught up again, yay! :) Damn. Cobalt was my favorite! How could you do this to me Madison??? Anyway ;) this was a ...

Good Morning! I'm taking advantage of the two-hour delay to read and review this chapter for you! For this chapter I felt like some of it was, I don't knows, ...

Hi there! I happened upon this poem by chance, and I'm really glad that I did! The very beginning drew me in and kept my attention. You've woven your words ...

Did someone say SUGILITE??? Sorry, just being obsessed with Steven Universe lol. Anyway, hi! Alright my first nit pick is this sentence here; "'Mhmm?' she asks, looking over shoulder to ...

Heeyyy I'm finally getting around to reviewing this after a very long spell of laziness. So overall this is a decent chapter. I think there are some rough spots that ...

Oh sweet, I didn't even see this one was up already. I'm happy now :D "Unlike our guns, Noxcus use shots that can contain small bits of venom of a ...

Hi there and happy Review Day! I'm sorry for the delay on this review, I left to go stay with my sister right after you posted it, but do not ...

This is a really interesting piece! I'm no expert on poetry, so I don't have a lot of criticism to give on this. I do like the vagueness of it ...

Ah, good timing as usual Serene, I'm in need to points and something to review! Yes this IS pretty long xD but at this point that's alright because your readers ...

Yay, thanks for publishing this right as I was looking for stuff to read! (It feels good to be caught up xD ) So first of all I'd like to ...

Hi Ehtaniel :) I'm sorry that it took me so long to get to this chapter, but here I am to review! I love the pacing you use in this. ...

Hi there :) LittleFox here to give you a review! I really enjoyed the overall tone of your poem and the images it creates. I've always loved poems like this. ...

I'M ALL CAUGHT UP! *Throws confetti* Ok first nitpick of the day; "'So, August 1st," Kasami chuckles, "You're birthday is coming up soon, isn't it?'" I think it's a little ...

Heeeeyy! I'm getting so close to being caught up ^^ Okay so for this chapter, my main criticism is in agreement with JamesHunt. Yes, all the information is important, but ...

Hey It's me again for another reveiw :D So I really like Hera from the instant she came into the story, so I am a happy camper right now. Just ...