Lionhero333

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wohey loved it truely did, your poerty freakishly describes my life a little to well :) the soft sound of a computer dying made me think of you. ----> An ...

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Nothing but misconstrued directions we struggle to keep hold the fantasisies of insecure individuals wishing for lifes of gold "But dreams are what drives us," they say with buoyancy those ...

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Right! I'm back with time on my hands! Now... firstly, the "my stomach is parched" thing is still getting to me. I have never heard anyone say it before, and ...

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There are some fragments and run-ons, but nothing too bad. I mostly had a problem with the exagerated examples. You started off fine, with examples of a persistent boy calling ...

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I really like the pre chorus. It sounds like something I would say. Nice Job, Chevy.Atomic Number 50....would be Tin. What's the significance of tin? Am I looking too much ...

Hello here to review this wonderful, yet tragically sad work of yours. So first of all the things I like, no loved about this was I got a feel of ...

Ahhh.... Romance what its like to be in love. Whats it like to be in young love... Well any love. I think you did a really good job with this. ...

I'm sorry but I don't really know anything about music. I see that you were talking about court so I assume you're talking about playing a guitar I can definitely ...

This poem is such a rollercoaster ride. I feel as though the main character goes through some sort of depression and is in some sort of gray area. Where everything ...

This kind of reminds me of, we've always lived in a castle. Maybe it's because I just got done seeing the movie A few days ago. But the way that ...

Hey, I see that this is from 2004 so I don't know if you're actually still on here or not. But I just wanted to say I was skimming through ...

I enjoyed this. Its not too much or too drawn out. In a sense it is what it is. Nothing is every without meaning so i do feel its fair ...

❤❤❤ i love young adult romance books. This is a really good start. You understand the character and their predicament. Honestly I do not see anything wrong or thats a ...

This poem is very beautiful. I can relate to it so much. I feel the same way about my writing, it feeld like what you write is like confessions or ...

Firstly, no such thing as a short poem, as long as uoi get your point acrossed its fine. And you did that, this poem is so real and just laid ...