Lionhero333

Waddup! I'll start off by saying i hope you are having an amazing day or night... Or week... Month? Year? Life? All of the above. Lets dive in. First, I ...

Hey there, Readingaddict I just wanna start off by saying your poem is really good. It flows nicely which maybe the most important thing in a poem. You prefer a ...

Hey there, just wanna say that Im very interested to read about these charcters(Tyrone, Alexis, and Marissa) Dynamics like Marissa and Alexis dont seem to last too long, Im really ...

Hey, Raelyn First off, I have to say that this poem is really good. You didnt try to overthink it. Sometimes, when people write poems (especially ones that rhyme) they ...

ok first... Hi👋👋👋 Second did you put 2 poems in the same post because you didnt have enough points to post them both separate, if so, thats brilliant. No offense ...

Hey there, firstly, I just want to say welcome to the YWS community because I see you just joined a day ago (give or take). Second I would like to ...

I want to review just for points but to be honest this is perfect. The way you were patient with your writing and the end makes you want to keep ...

Hey there, This was a really good read. I have to be honest. A very strong strong opening I must say. For a lake of a better word this poem ...

This is good work. It sorta feels like one of those casual moments in time, where the mind kind've blanks out and your there wondering, is this it? Is this ...

Hey there Firstly I wanna say that when it comes to anything you write don't worry if people can understand all the underlining details. Especially with poems I think. Im ...

Hey there, I first wanna say that this was/is an amazing poem you wrote, truly. Sorry if you are looking for words of improvement or anything like that. I don't ...

Hey, there Most of the time there are 2 parts to my reviews. The actual review and then praise that I give you Ok, lets start. I must say that ...

Hey, there This will be a short review. This was really really great I must say. I envisioned it all, I found this very inspiring in a way. The reason ...

Hey there, This is a pretty good start. I had planned to go into detail but I won't go to far the reason being is that your profile says your ...

Hey there, this is a short review of course. But I need the points... You understand. Short and to the point, in fact there was no point its like an ...