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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Unworthy wave

    Waddup! I'll start off by saying i hope you are having an amazing day or night... Or week... Month? Year? Life? All of the above. Lets dive in. First, I ...

    Jul 6, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: Distraction

    Hey there, Readingaddict I just wanna start off by saying your poem is really good. It flows nicely which maybe the most important thing in a poem. You prefer a ...

    Mar 17, 2021

  • Other » General, General
    Re: Characters for a Potential Story

    Hey there, just wanna say that Im very interested to read about these charcters(Tyrone, Alexis, and Marissa) Dynamics like Marissa and Alexis dont seem to last too long, Im really ...

    Mar 17, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Love is blooming

    Hey, Raelyn First off, I have to say that this poem is really good. You didnt try to overthink it. Sometimes, when people write poems (especially ones that rhyme) they ...

    Mar 17, 2021


  • ok first... Hi👋👋👋 Second did you put 2 poems in the same post because you didnt have enough points to post them both separate, if so, thats brilliant. No offense ...

    Mar 14, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: SHE

    Hey there, firstly, I just want to say welcome to the YWS community because I see you just joined a day ago (give or take). Second I would like to ...

    Mar 14, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 1.1

    I want to review just for points but to be honest this is perfect. The way you were patient with your writing and the end makes you want to keep ...

    Feb 25, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: War Goddess

    Hey there, This was a really good read. I have to be honest. A very strong strong opening I must say. For a lake of a better word this poem ...

    Dec 27, 2020

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: "South For The Winter."

    This is good work. It sorta feels like one of those casual moments in time, where the mind kind've blanks out and your there wondering, is this it? Is this ...

    Dec 16, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Promise of the World

    Hey there Firstly I wanna say that when it comes to anything you write don't worry if people can understand all the underlining details. Especially with poems I think. Im ...

    Dec 16, 2020

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    Re: My Heart is Alight

    Hey there, I first wanna say that this was/is an amazing poem you wrote, truly. Sorry if you are looking for words of improvement or anything like that. I don't ...

    Dec 16, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.1

    Hey, there Most of the time there are 2 parts to my reviews. The actual review and then praise that I give you Ok, lets start. I must say that ...

    Nov 29, 2020


  • Hey, there This will be a short review. This was really really great I must say. I envisioned it all, I found this very inspiring in a way. The reason ...

    Nov 29, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)

    Hey there, This is a pretty good start. I had planned to go into detail but I won't go to far the reason being is that your profile says your ...

    Nov 28, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: .

    Hey there, this is a short review of course. But I need the points... You understand. Short and to the point, in fact there was no point its like an ...

    Nov 27, 2020


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