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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i think it's crazy

    This is a really interesting poem Not all poetry has to be sane, you know what I mean? This is just mindless and there is a beauty to this. I ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: CO

    Thanks a lot. :)

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The War Within

    Thank you so much!!!%uD83D%uDC95

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 4 {Edited}

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}

    Your writing style is impeccable. You right in first person very well. Ive noticed that a lot of people will attempt to write in first person, but they overdo it, ...

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Devious

    Oct 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Forget Their Scripts.

    I love your writing style. This is proof here that you don't have to rhyme to have a good poem. Celebrities have influenced the world so much and sometimes for ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Scribblings

    I love your writing style. For someone your age it was really well written. I was entertained the whole time. Keep up the good work.

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Forget Their Scripts.

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Forget Their Scripts.

    Sep 9, 2014


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites