Lioness

Hello, Squire Lioness here to slay a Green Room Monster! What a beautiful, long, poem. The imagery used... amazing. I really felt connected with this poem. So! Onto the review. ...

Wow. Just wow. I never can write screenplays, mine never seem right. But you have a talent for it, I can see that. As far as I can see, there ...

Hello, annabanana. Lioness here for a review. You have a nice, little poem here. I can imagine this in a children's poetry book. The rhyming is excellent. I have an ...

Hello, Squire Lioness of the Green Room here to review! I haven't reviewed any song lyrics before, but I can imagine this as a song in the charts. You are ...

I seem to see this poem as humour, and I am not quite sure why. I understand the part about the toast landing butter side up when you do something ...

This poem is beautiful. There, I said it. I needed to get that thought written down so you know how much I love this poem. I am here to review ...

I am intrigued by this piece, and I love the idea of it. The eagle's thoughts are very mysterious, and I particularly like the part about time. Your vocabulary is ...

This is such a serious matter to write poetry about, but you crafted it in a way that made it easier to understand. This subject can never be beautiful, but ...

This is a very good piece. I can't wait to see your novel. I have, however, a few slight issues. If I were you, I wouldn't use symbols instead of ...

This is a very interesting piece. I like it a lot. However, it's only a prologue, and it seems a little long an a lot of information is dumped onto ...

This is an excellent piece of writing. I . Love. It. There. You have a brilliant use if short sentences, but use some longer,more descriptive ones too. Your first person ...

I love this poem! For me, it sounded just like Hickory Dickory Dock (I think that's it). It sounded just like a child's nursery rhyme. I must say however, that ...

I did like this piece, but for me it didn't flow as well as it could. I couldn't distinguish if it was past or present, but I don't know if ...

I like this piece as it is really descriptive. The first paragraph built up such a picture of the care home, I almost imagined being there. The first person voice ...

I like this piece as it is really descriptive. The first paragraph built up such a picture of the care home, I almost imagined being there. The first person voice ...