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Re: A lover's Era
Hi there, dear. This is a beautiful poem, and I think it's really good. The flow, the meaning...all really good. ^_^ Good job, darling. Here is one grammar thingy -- ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: I Saw the Red
Hey Jared! You always complain about not writing, but whenever you do write, I love it! Good job, dear! Now here we go, darlin. I saw the red. The red. ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Closed :)
Hi Sura! ^_^ I saw this, and I figured I'll drop by and review it. Seven hours later, just after one in the morning, Mel checked to see that everything ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: The Siren of The Wood
Hi Jon!! You request, I come! :D A siren's song could be heard for miles, Her sweet, sweet chords -- Her seductive style. Pitches held high are so pure and ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)
Hi volleyball buddy! *snugs* I'm here to review! Thank you for giving me something! I sighed and looked up from my book to take another sip of my Frappachino. I'm ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Not right for me or each other
...I'm crying now Abby. Thanks for telling me about this! I'm not good at reviewing poetry, but here is my input. So, I assume that this is in free verse. ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Jamais Quitter [4] (ending modified)
So, Suz! I've been secretly reading this behind your back, and not posting any reviews. But all of them have been awesome and I love reading them! I loved this ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset Chapter Two Part One
Hey! I finally to what you wanted me to review! ^^ Here we go! The sunny guest bedroom at my dads house was nothing like my room in Franklin. Dad ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset Chapter One Part Two
Hey there! I'm late, again, but I'm on a streak today! ^^ I see that Sakura pointed out a lot of important things, and xDudettex got a lot of the ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset Chapter One
Hey there! I'm finally getting around to reviewing, so here I am. :D I think xDudettex picked out most of the nit-picks. You had a lot of awkward sentences in ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.
Hiya Colleen! Sorry if you don't like me shortening your name, but it was pretty long. I know you wanted me to review the another post in the series, but ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran
They are really good books. I love reading them, and Rick Riordan was an amazing author for these books, even if it was his first books for "kids." The last ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: S.P. 0.2
Hiya asxz! You request, I come. Also, I didn't review the first part because I thought everything had been pointed out and I felt no need in reviewing it. :D ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 1
Hiya Storm! You request, I come. I think all the grammer issues have been pointed out. Watch out for changing tenses, hon. :wink: I'll help explain it if you want ...
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: The Bedside Reminder
Hiya Lily! You requested, I come. All the grammar issues have already been pointed out, so I don't think I need to point them out again. But I do have ...
Feb 28, 2009
