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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A lover's Era

    Hi there, dear. This is a beautiful poem, and I think it's really good. The flow, the meaning...all really good. ^_^ Good job, darling. Here is one grammar thingy -- ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Saw the Red

    Hey Jared! You always complain about not writing, but whenever you do write, I love it! Good job, dear! Now here we go, darlin. I saw the red. The red. ...

    Apr 24, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Closed :)

    Hi Sura! ^_^ I saw this, and I figured I'll drop by and review it. Seven hours later, just after one in the morning, Mel checked to see that everything ...

    Apr 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Siren of The Wood

    Hi Jon!! You request, I come! :D A siren's song could be heard for miles, Her sweet, sweet chords -- Her seductive style. Pitches held high are so pure and ...

    Apr 23, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)

    Hi volleyball buddy! *snugs* I'm here to review! Thank you for giving me something! I sighed and looked up from my book to take another sip of my Frappachino. I'm ...

    Apr 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not right for me or each other

    ...I'm crying now Abby. Thanks for telling me about this! I'm not good at reviewing poetry, but here is my input. So, I assume that this is in free verse. ...

    Mar 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jamais Quitter [4] (ending modified)

    So, Suz! I've been secretly reading this behind your back, and not posting any reviews. But all of them have been awesome and I love reading them! I loved this ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Another Sunset Chapter Two Part One

    Hey! I finally to what you wanted me to review! ^^ Here we go! The sunny guest bedroom at my dads house was nothing like my room in Franklin. Dad ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Another Sunset Chapter One Part Two

    Hey there! I'm late, again, but I'm on a streak today! ^^ I see that Sakura pointed out a lot of important things, and xDudettex got a lot of the ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Another Sunset Chapter One

    Hey there! I'm finally getting around to reviewing, so here I am. :D I think xDudettex picked out most of the nit-picks. You had a lot of awkward sentences in ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.

    Hiya Colleen! Sorry if you don't like me shortening your name, but it was pretty long. I know you wanted me to review the another post in the series, but ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran

    They are really good books. I love reading them, and Rick Riordan was an amazing author for these books, even if it was his first books for "kids." The last ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: S.P. 0.2

    Hiya asxz! You request, I come. Also, I didn't review the first part because I thought everything had been pointed out and I felt no need in reviewing it. :D ...

    Mar 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 1

    Hiya Storm! You request, I come. I think all the grammer issues have been pointed out. Watch out for changing tenses, hon. :wink: I'll help explain it if you want ...

    Feb 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Bedside Reminder

    Hiya Lily! You requested, I come. All the grammar issues have already been pointed out, so I don't think I need to point them out again. But I do have ...

    Feb 28, 2009


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