Lindsaroo

Awwww how sweet. I think you should cut "too" at the very end and it would sound much better to the ears. Other than that, it's a very cute love ...

Hey Ash, I like it, but I think that you need to bend it around a bit. It was kind of hard for me to understand what was going on. ...

omg I loved this book! And the sequel was awesome too. oh and scasha, I bought that series, and I started reading the Uglies and it's great so far but ...

Awwwww Tiff, this poem is so lovely. I really like it ^^ I am completely and wholly his. ^ I really love your ending. It was just great. I'm not ...

To what Kenpachi Masamune said, it looked like she was rhyming with the 2nd and 4th rhyme, just using near rhymes. I really like this. You made the rhyming flow ...

So this is my first shot at poeetry in three years...I've been way to shy to post any. When he left me I nearly died Did he not realize What ...

Ok well I don't know if I'm repeating anyone here or not, since I'm lazy to read all the reviews XD but I really thought the main idea of it ...

Hi again :p I really like where you're going with this story. I mean, you set up the um...plot? really well. You show that something is going on but you ...

Hey Errant. I think this starts off very good. The whole thing was slightly hard to read just because of some grammar mistakes and whatnot...but I think they've been pointed ...

Hey Ash. I really like the style you're going with on this. *And no werewolves for once! I'm impressed!* I love reading journal type things because then you really feel ...

I think you have a good idea but you have to work on some stuff. The only one was me, the only one you refused to see. No matter what ...

I read your poem and I felt like typing out FTW!!!! haha I liked this. It was really nice and I liked how you set it up. The repitition didn't ...

I really liked this. It was very sad and emotional. At first I cried Protected myself As the punches and kicks Hit me. Then I took it No emotion on ...

Hi there Jassie!! It's too early for me to be mean, so I'm gonna say that I liked this. ^_^ The idea of comparing a home to prison is used ...

Awww Vince! I loved the ending. I giggled. :oops: hehe I don't think the mosters under the bed theme is over used at all! I love that stuff!! I think ...