Lil_Pau

Wow...very nice choice of words! This is a beautiful piece. I enjoyed it. Very good. Keep it up! :)

This is a very enjoyable piece of work. The way you write this is very unique and I liked it. Keep it up!

This is one of the best poems i've ever read. Very good work, besides a few errors such as the 'to's and 'too's. I really enjoyed this. Keep it up! ...

Oh it's OK. Thanks for commenting! Also thanks to others who had reviewed on other poems :)

This is a wonderful poem. I have nothing else to say... Good work!! And keep up!!

Hey, this is very nice! Good work! The metaphors are awesome, the imagery is great... I don't know what else to say... Keep up the good work! :)

Very nice structure and rhyming! I enjoyed this one very much. I can feel the sadness & rhyme in this one. And good luck with that book you're writing! :)

Its so...solemn and haunting. I really like this poem. It has good metaphors and gives the reader a sad feeling. Keep up!! :)

OK, I'll bear that in mind. :) Anyway, thanks for reviewing! :D

This is really beautiful. Great job.

This poem was fantastically done! I loved the imagery. But there are some points that you need to improve, though (Vernon has already explained everything, so I won't say more). ...

I don't know what to say...well, it was short and nice, but if expanded a bit, I think it could be better.

This is such an enjoyable piece. I love the way the poem flows. Keep up! :)

I liked this, it has a point. But I think the stanzas were kinda 'messed up'. Nevertheless, it's still good. :)

Yes, very good job. This poem reminds me of standing in a serene forest (for some reason). Keep up! :)