Lil_Pau

Hey there! I thought this poem was well-written and you conveyed the message well. For these lines: (to which, as children do, you'll go, tomorrow and for some years yet.) ...

Nice job with this! You did quite well with the imagery and the flow of the poem. I liked the last stanza the most. There's only one thing that I ...

Hey, I really liked this. It was beautiful and I liked the imagery. You used a good choice of words. The only problem I had was that some of the ...

Hey there! I thought that although this was rather simple, you managed to convey the message well and also, it's something that everyone can relate to. Between the two poems, ...

I thought this was a really good poem. I liked the imagery, the wording and the structure. Like alleycat13 mentioned above, this is abstract and a unique way to write ...

Hi there! I thought that you did a good job with this poem. There was imagery and good usage of words. But there were some errors that made the poem ...

Wow. Like CK Lynn said, this was written in a strange way, but it was done uniquely. I like the imagery, the choice of words and the tone of this ...

Although this is one of those 'love poems' that I usually am tired of, I thought that you did a really good job. Your choice of words made it really ...

Hey there! I really liked this poem. It sounded 'complete.' You managed to use many colourful words and at the same time, emphasize the point. However... You are unique, your ...

Oh my. I thought this poem was very beautiful. I loved your choice of words, the imagery and I liked the fact that it was short. It's one really cute ...

Wow. From the moment I read this, I was immediately struck dumb. I couldn't find any fault with it. The imagery and description were really wonderful. It also flowed really ...

Ahaha. I liked this. It was very unique and well done. Short, but nice. ^^ Anyway, the line: "Order While for knowledge yearning" What do you mean by 'order while?' ...

Hi there! ^^ This poem simply blew me away. I was caught up in your wonderful use of language and the great rhythm in it. And yet, it flows so ...

Hi there! I'd like to review your poem. ^^ One mistake I noticed in the first stanza: The Letter The letter; she's been waiting Days, upon days, upon days Hope ...

Hiya! I thought that this poem was really nice and enjoyable, with some good imagery. It also flowed pretty well. However, I do agree with CK Lynn about the "two ...