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LilPWilly

LilPWilly

  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Bathrooms and Bad Zooms

    Gross

    May 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Bathrooms and Bad Zooms

    Gross

    May 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Fools Gold

    Awesome. Great twist on the classic👏👏👏

    Apr 25, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Advice for a YWS poet

    Thanks lol

    Apr 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: Thomas Wakefield and the Certitude of Fate

    What books do you read? If they’re as magnificent as this I’d be thrilled to read them myself.

    Apr 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Drinking

    There are a lot of typos, but I like the repetition and concept!

    Apr 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: ornaments of identity

    The way you express this is perfect in so many ways. I love especially the part about the small closet, that’s a really excellent touch. I also like the font ...

    Apr 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Waiting for a Day That Will Never Come

    I feel that.

    Apr 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: The Best Poem

    Oof

    Apr 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: All I Have

    Thanks! The story isn%u2019t over...

    Apr 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Romantic Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 2

    I feel like this is professional work. The story is well paced, the characters consistent and every sentence is worth attention. I wanna know what she is afraid of!

    Mar 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 1

    Ofc! And idc lol it%u2019s just if you want to publish or whatever.

    Mar 28, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: All I Have

    Cool lol

    Mar 28, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 1

    Dangg I love this. Great concept, interesting story and efficient character building. I’m interested to see where this story goes. Only one note, who is 15? The way you put ...

    Mar 27, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: All I Have

    Thanks man, Zack? James? Loll

    Mar 27, 2021


They who talk all day of beauty call all the plain things dirty
— John Darnielle