LilPWilly

For some reason, it won’t let me edit the correct breaks in. There's supposed to be space for the chorus after let's go, and after your wrinkles are my thing. ...

Haha okay lol well good luck to all of you then

Thank you, it%u2019s reviews like this that shape my songwriting and keep me going%u2764%uFE0F

Thank you! I wanted to avoid having way and away end a phrase in the same stanza, but maybe it sounds better than I%u2019d think? What do you think? Again ...

I’m American, so I’m a little lost tbh lol. But this is good, interesting. I imagine that you could take this character far in a longer project. Did you see ...

This has a beautiful flavor. It reminds me of CS Lewis' best approximation of Arabic storytelling in A Horse and His Boy. Your English is still a little hard to ...

“Douglas Adams faked his death?!”

Good. I can%u2019t wait to see more%uD83D%uDE09

Thanks for the review! I was thinking Siamese twins. I intended Hayd to sound like hate as in I%u2019d hate to suffocate. And I wasn%u2019t sure what I meant by ...

Hey top notch review, thanks a lot! You%u2019re right, I wasn%u2019t sure if I wanted all of those paragraphs in there, but I also wanted to fit everything I was ...

Bye! I read archaic literature, so the outdated grammar bled through into this piece. I meant the waiter to sound sarcastic in that peculiar line. Thanks!

Thanks lol

Not you lol Every song is copy pasted Cause these feelings don%u2019t go away Nah they don%u2019t away