LilPWilly

This is beautiful! The last stanza is so true, it seems that when I fall in love that I am least conscious of it, of myself.

This one is slower and more peaceful. How did you ever get to the point where you could write this beautifully?

This is incredible. Every time I read one of your poems I feel like my mind is climbing a ladder rung to enlightenment loll

The visuals are fantastic as ever. The second stanza threw me off. Good stuff tho

Wow

UNDERRATED POET ALERT if I could just skip forward a few years and have a degree in marketing I would partner with you. This one is a little harder to ...

Thx lol

This is the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Plz write more

Wow. “Like my hand slipped while connecting the dots.” The depth and simplicity of this poem are fantastic, and of course the drawing tying the metaphor together visually makes it ...

Thanks. I just wrote it and I haven%u2019t really gone anywhere lol but I haven%u2019t been suicidal for a few years so that%u2019s good.

Thanks Harry! Yes it%u2019s a deep and personal poem. Much of it has a literal meaning in my life. %u2018Her friends%u2019 are leopards and worms more or less because of ...

Thanks caljoh. What does it remind you of?

Thanks! Those two lines are actually disconnected. I'm scared to see their name because I know I'm going to get chewed out, usually with friends watching. The next line references ...

Thank you so much! That is good advice. Maybe I will elaborate, make a short novel. I would certainly have to take your advice. I%u2019ll do it if I find ...

Hey it’s me again. And it’s you again, leading me on with the title. Only critique, for some reason, on mobile, I can’t read your full work. And I’m dying ...