LilPWilly

Good guesses, but that%u2019s not what I intended! You%u2019re right about the well loll.

I don%u2019t have any tips for structure lol Every line is so powerful it would be a shame to edit them, or, if you will, to sterilize them.

Cool poem.

Ofc yonia. @Jason20 which one?

Thanks! You%u2019re getting close to the hidden meaning, the second line you listed is a big clue...

That%u2019s cool. If you put a comma in it would make sense. But that%u2019s a cool sentiment is what I mean. I hope you catch your dream. Speaking of, I ...

This is well written and relatable. My only question, what does the ‘dream let time control me’ bit mean?

Cool

Thanks! I%u2019m glad everybody likes it, but there%u2019s something else I wanted to come across as well...%uD83E%uDDD0

Thanks! You should check out my blog, I've got a lot of fun stuff in there.

Does anybody get the hidden meaning?

Thanks! Yeah I should have changed the wellll loll

That’s so sad, and such a sweet poem. I can’t imagine how awful it would be to lose someone like this.

That’s so sad, and such a sweet poem. I can’t imagine how awful it would be to lose someone like this. I’m sorry. What’s a Rakhi?

Aww i know the feeling lol