Lightsong

Thanks for the review! You're fast - I love it. :3 I'm glad I was able to portray Manisha's character nicely, because I'm afraid, between her and Rachelle, she's the ...

Thanks for the review! I'm going to take as much good in it as I can. :D Hmm, I think cellophane tape is better than plaster, I've just remembered the ...

Tis okay. Yeah, I need to give more indication to his gender. I'm so excited and terrified in continuing this story because the issue is very personal to me and ...

Tis okay. Yeah, I need to give more indication to his gender. I'm so excited and terrified in continuing this story because the issue is very personal to me and ...

Hey, thanks for the review. I just want to inform you that the protagonist is a he, not a she; the name Khalid is for boys. :3

Erm, I understand most parts, and this is humorous. Nice job! :D

Thanks for the review! :D I plan to post more, but I can't guarantee when. xD Sometimes it takes a while for me to go to the next part, and ...

OH MY GOD ANOTHER GEM. YOU ARE MY FANTASY GOD/DESS. Remind me to review this one too.

THIS IS GEM. Please remind me to review this later.

Thanks for the review! The light is a Cryptic. can't help myself huehuehue

Not much to say here, but this poem sparks a discussion between me and my friend. Excellent job, guys. :')

Thanks for the review! :D Hmm, I have two people commenting on the diary part. I guess I'll have to make it less formal next time. :'D Interesting question! Well, ...

o: Thanks! Anyway, yeah, this is kinda an experiment to me, the formalized writing. This novel is a new version of the original one, Bad Lights, Good Lights (you can ...

*screams in delight* omgomgomg *calms self* Thanks for the review! Yeah, I've been considering at which ages these characters should be. I wanted to make them 16/17 but decided not ...

Wow! I didn't think the maid would play a role later, but the, ehem, spoiler make it more intriguing. ;) Sure, I'll read and review the second chapter for you. ...