Lightsong

Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D First impression would be how this poem is more about inner monologue rather than focusing on imagery. I like that kind ...

Hey, I'm here to review! This chapter is pretty much a scene, and a lack-of-dialogue one at that. I'm pleased to see how the trouble the Prince's having is replaced ...

Hey, I'm here to give a crappy review! :D “You were perfect,” he said, before raising his machine to his face to check if the base was hugging the sphere ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D I find it it a little bit funny to have Night having a monologue with herself. Not that it couldn't happen, but the format ...

Hey, I'm here to review! All in all, this chapter is solid, as usual. I like how you keep the suspense of the driving by giving them a few moments ...

Hi, I'm here to review! :D It's going to be a little short here. I would have to say the unicorn is the spotlight of this sub-chapter. I like the ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Expect my presence every time you post your work. ;) I am confused. Like, seriously. If I'm not mistaken, they come into Erinore, are ...

Hey, I'm here to give a short review! :D I love the message you have here and how you deliver it through simple means. I like the dynamic between the ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D WHAT IS THIS REALLY?! I. Am. Not. Satisfied. I think you've done an excellent job to keep our intrigue in check, and the atmosphere ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D She wore a beard, which wasn’t uncommon for dwarven women, though they tended to go in and out of fashion. Whuuut? This reminds me ...

Hey Fox! I'm here to review. :D The trickling water was clean and clear, and she had the distinct desire to drink from it, until she saw the familiar figure ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D He squinted at them again, turning around briefly to look them all in the face. I would prefer him to look through the mirror ...

Hey, I'm here to give a quick review! :D Dana laughed sourly, “To take a shit, but I’ll come back in a bit when it’s empty.” Margo snorted and washed ...

Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D A trail to be followed by a familiar face You leave pieces of yourself On the grounds you touch I use ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D I find the whole thing intriguing! Amber Shanndrae is definitely an interesting character. The lines she leaves is also interesting, and like Night, I ...