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Re: i left.
Gosh, I love this. This is self-discovery . This is the realization that true love doesn't necessarily need to be a result of one's relationship with a person -- this ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Shoes
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D The first stanza pretty much hooks me. I'm interested in reading where it leads me with the shoes being seemingly not ...
Apr 10, 2017 -
Re: Never Gonna Give You Up
Hey, I'm just here to say I appreciate your use of repetition, it greatly emphasizes the message this lyric is trying to deliver. I also think the use of capitalization ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: Away--Chapter 6
Hey, I'm here to review! Congrats for being promoted to an Angel! :D Agatha twisted around to look at Danara at a red light, scrutinizing her eager face. This sentence ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch6
Hey, I'm here as promised. :D I'm going to focus on Reiner very, very much. Like, this is going to be hardcore character analysis. o"o Or I hope it would ...
Mar 31, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 3.1
Hey, I'm here again to annoy you review! :D First Reading This subchapter is another showcase for your talent of making interesting characters. Jeanine here is clearly the spotlight, what's ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch5
Hey, I'm here to review. :D Brinn sighed. “They will test our skills so they know what kinds of classes we need to start with.” “Aren’t we all in the ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
Hey, I'm here to review. ;) "I often ponder how it feels to be burnt alive." Why? Just why ? You'll feel hot and dying. This kind of ponder displays ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For
Hey, I'm here to review. :D First of all, I would just like to say this is among the best ffs you've ever written . Like seriously, it's up there ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: The Last Bounty [RC:R1]
I can literally see someone asking for feedback, and here I am. ;) Let's get into this. Had it really only been three days ago that he had turned over ...
Mar 13, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (1.2)
I've been reading and Liking Liz + Zac and I think it's time to review it! :D First Reading The feeling I have when I first read this subchapter is ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch1
After days of postponing (which is totally different than procrastinating), I'm here to finally review! :D The use of cloud setting to begin the story is effective, as it not ...
Feb 22, 2017 -
Re: Melt - 2.2 - Followers
Hey, I'm here to review! :D At the beginning of this chapter, I can truly feel the tension in the situation, presented by how the powerful people react to Evan's ...
Feb 19, 2017 -
Re: for Rachel.
Hey, I'm here to review. The intention behind this poem requires two thumbs up for me. That being said, I'm going to rip this regardless of it. I would suggest ...
Feb 18, 2017 -
Re: Like Other Girls 1.1 (LMS)
Hey, I'm here to review :D The story starts with a focus to the setting, Silver, which is not the central setting and instead functions as a way to tell ...
Feb 18, 2017
