Lethargic

Great work! I like how strong the conviction in your writing is. My only problem here is that I would’ve liked to see these convictions fleshed out even more. You ...

A/N: Sorry for the wait! I hope this chapter was worth the wait, haha.

Sorry for the late reply, but thanks! I ended going back and making some changes, mostly based on Evan%u2019s thoughts about Jamie, haha. Evan%u2019s normally a little bit of a ...

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This poem hit me like a ton of bricks. The implications here are devastating. This is some great stuff! I like that you didn’t go with obvious metaphors. The metaphor ...

Wow, good job! The first thing I see as that you did a really good job portraying Wenton as annoyed with Cody right off the bat. I think the best ...

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I love how disturbingly detailed the whole thing is! I had to look up the meaning of the name, and I have to say that it’s quite clever, in a ...

This is a really short and sweet poem! It’s very straightforward and I like the contemplative voice of the narrator. Good job!

This is a really short and sweet poem! It’s very straightforward and I like the contemplative voice of the narrator. Good job!

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That last section caught me off guard completely. The first two sections made it out to be something completely different, which makes the ending even more of a gut punch. ...

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That last section caught me off guard completely. The first two sections made it out to be something completely different, which makes the ending even more of a gut punch. ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks!

Of course! I%u2019ll be sure to keep up with this story, so expect to see me review a lot of the chapters going forward!

This is an amazing poem from you! I think its main appeal is its simplicity. It’s a very beautiful poem with amazing choices in words and metaphors. I love the ...