Lethargic

First of all, I adore the classical voice you’ve used here. It gives the poem an almost Shakespearean feel to it, which is helped by the fact that the poem ...

This is great! I think that you’ve had a stroke of genius here. I will admit, I was not expecting much when I first clicked into this piece, but you ...

Wow. Just, wow. Reading the first few lines, I thought this was going to be a relatively innocent poem about a parade. I was wrong. I love the repetition of ...

I really like this poem! I love how you describe getting hurt in the opening stanza. I thought the metaphor of navigating in the dark was brilliant! Speaking of brilliant, ...

First of all, I love how you’ve depicted a failed long distance relationship. I like how you were vague about how the narrator’s SO has hurt them, as it allows ...

This poem hit me like a ton of bricks. The implications here are devastating. This is some great stuff! I like that you didn’t go with obvious metaphors. The metaphor ...

Wow, good job! The first thing I see as that you did a really good job portraying Wenton as annoyed with Cody right off the bat. I think the best ...

I love how disturbingly detailed the whole thing is! I had to look up the meaning of the name, and I have to say that it’s quite clever, in a ...

Another great chapter! Judy and Edith continue to have great chemistry. Judy’s more reserved and shy personality really shine through this chapter. I really liked hearing Judy’s backstory. Having

That last section caught me off guard completely. The first two sections made it out to be something completely different, which makes the ending even more of a gut punch. ...

First things first, I really like the journal entry format of this story. It works very well for stories like this. There are a few points in the story where ...

First things first. This was an amazing first chapter! I’m already hooked. I’m going to separate this review into a few different sections. CHARACTERS: I think you have great characterization ...

This is a great poem! I really love how haunting everything about it is, and how the narrator never draws too much attention to themselves. The character of the boy ...

I love everything about this poem! Every emotion that the narrator feels is conveyed clearly. I love the metaphor of losing faith in your religion and the uncertainty that comes ...

This is a really neat story. I’d say your biggest strength here is that you write really vivid descriptions. Everything is in such vivid detail which really helps sell the ...