LeonineLisbeth

Lisbeth here to review! Very poetic indeed, and so beautiful to read. Often with poetry I like to lightly sway from side-to-side as the words flow. I feel very deeply ...

Hi! Here to give a review ^^ The word "Love" caught my attention which brought me to reading this, as I am a sucker for romance-themed writings. When this kind ...

Wow, such a beautiful language used in this piece! I am a sucker for imagery, so this has definitely piqued my interest. :) I love the description of the "coming ...

I really liked the wording here. The words you chose gave a perfect visual, and was easy to imagine. I love the variety of vocabulary! That being said, it doesn't ...

How beautiful ^^ A very deep story told in lyrical/poetic form. I really liked the way there was a dedicated paragraph to each kind of person- Mother, Father, Teacher, Friend ...

This really spoke to me, as it's as real as any writer can experience in these kinds of moments. I can 100% relate to this kind of emotion, then again ...

Love the username ^^ I like the sense of comparison in this writing. I can imagine the person (aka the darker shade of blue) putting someone else on a pedestal ...

This was amazing! I thought it was fantastic how this poem was done in second person, making it sound like that you were talking to me personally. It gives it ...

Oh man, this was amazing! I love the way every sentence begins with "You know", or "You often" etc. I think that really adds in the element of realism, and ...

I thought this poem was fantastic! The emotional depth and feeling you put into it is amazing, and the references like "Bugs bunny" were nice too. Hate to be picky, ...

Amazing! I felt kind of sad while reading, but thought it was a fantastic poem at the same time! I feel like the theme of death here is really intense, ...

This was written with such emotion. How beautiful it is! You are an amazing writer, and what you wrote here is pure evidence that you will get far in your ...